The Pitch

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The meeting room on the twenty-third floor had a view across the whole city, and Nadia suspected that this was deliberate. It was designed to make people like her feel small.

She had ten minutes. Across the glass table sat three partners from Halverson Capital, one of the most influential capital firms in Europe. If they invested, her company would survive. If they didn’t, she had about six weeks of money left before she would have to let her four employees go.

The app was called Steady. It helped people who were struggling with debt to understand their finances, set up realistic repayment plans and avoid the high-interest loans that trapped so many people in a cycle they couldn’t escape. Nadia had built the first version in her bedroom two years earlier, after watching her father lose his small shop to a loan he had never fully understood. Now Steady had a hundred and twenty thousand users, many of whom wrote to her personally to say it had changed their lives.

She began her exactly as she had rehearsed it, standing confidently, clicking through the slides. Growth figures. User reviews. The problem, the solution, the market. The partners listened politely. The man in the middle, Richard Halverson himself, tapped a silver pen against his notebook.

At minute five, she reached the slide she was proudest of: the number of users who had paid off their debts completely using Steady. Halverson raised a hand.

“Impressive,” he said. “Genuinely. But let me ask you a question. Your users are, almost by definition, people with poor credit who need money. Correct?”

“Many of them, yes.”

“And you have a hundred and twenty thousand of them, and very detailed information about their finances, their spending habits and their level of desperation.”

Nadia felt a slight chill. “We have their data, yes. It’s protected and anonymised.”

“Of course.” Halverson smiled. “Here’s where I see the real value. Lending companies would pay a great deal to reach exactly those customers at exactly the right moment. A small partnership — an advertisement for a loan, appearing just when a user is having a difficult week. It would be completely legal. And it would make Steady profitable within a year.”

The other two partners nodded. One of them had already started writing numbers in the margin of her notes.

For a moment, Nadia couldn’t speak. She understood perfectly what he was proposing. The very people her app was designed to protect would become the product. The app would use everything it knew about them to sell them the kind of loan that had destroyed her father’s business.

And she understood something else, too. They weren’t asking whether she would accept this. They were assuming it. This was how the game was played. Everybody . Her friends who had started companies had all told her the same thing: you take the money first and fight about values later.

She thought about her four employees, two of whom had young children. She thought about the six weeks of money left. She thought about the emails from users: the single mother who had finally paid off her credit card, the retired teacher who wrote that for the first time in years he could sleep at night.

“Can I be completely candid?” she said.

“Please,” said Halverson.

“What you’ve described would probably make money. It would also be a of every person who trusted us. Our users come to Steady because they believe we’re on their side. The moment we start selling their vulnerability to lenders, we become exactly the thing we were built to fight. I’m not prepared to do that.”

There was a silence. The partner with the notebook stopped writing.

“That’s a very principled position,” Halverson said, without any obvious irony. “But principles don’t pay salaries. You understand that we won’t invest on those terms.”

“I understand.”

She packed up her laptop with hands that were only slightly shaking. In the lift on the way down, she let herself feel the full weight of what she had done. Six weeks. Four people. She called her co-founder, Ben, and told him. He was quiet for a moment, then said, “Good. I’d have quit if you’d said yes.”

The story could have ended there, and for a while she thought it would. But three days later, she received an email from one of the partners at the meeting — the woman with the notebook, whose name was Elif Demir. She was leaving Halverson, she wrote, to set up a small fund focused on technology. She had been in hundreds of pitches, and Nadia’s was the first in years where the founder had walked away from easy money.

“I can’t offer you what Halverson could,” the email said. “Less money, slower growth, and I’ll want a smaller stake than they would. But I’ll never ask you to your users. Can we talk?”

Six months later, Steady had a new , all four employees and a clause in its founding documents that prohibited the sale or commercial use of user financial data, permanently.

When journalists later asked Nadia about that meeting, they usually wanted to hear that it had been an easy decision. She always told them the truth: it was the hardest ten minutes of her life. But three investors to fund her, she said, had turned out to be less important than refusing to be persuaded.

Words from the Story

investor noun B2
a person or company that puts money into a business to make a profit
pitch noun B2
a short presentation that tries to persuade people to buy or invest in something
venture noun B2
used in “venture capital”: money invested in new, risky businesses
equity noun B2
a share in a company that an investor owns in return for their money
ethical
morally right and fair
persuade
to make someone agree to do or believe something by giving reasons
compromise noun B1
to accept something lower than your standards or principles
betrayal
the act of breaking someone’s trust
exploit verb B2
to use someone unfairly for your own advantage

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  1. Why did Nadia create the app Steady?
  2. What did Richard Halverson propose?
  3. Why did Nadia find the proposal unacceptable?
  4. How did Nadia's co-founder react?
  5. What is the meaning of Nadia's final comment?
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